Ok here we go. So initially I was really proud of this one, I thought it was better than the other one. Then I had to read it a billion times to fix typos, grammar, spell, puntuaction and obviously every time I read it, I hated it a bit more. I put A LOT of effort on my spelling and grammar so it should definitely be better than last time. Also, as usual, I would like to know if you like the story. 

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Ok, so initially I wanted to write you some notes and ask you question and just do a lot of explaining, but I feel like maybe this whole thing works better if you just read it and tell me what you think. Please please don’t be scared of telling me if it sucks. Be honest, I know it’s kind of a hard place to be cause a girl once asked me to review her fic and I had to list everything that was wrong but that actually helped her so…ok I am rambling but I am very embarassed and akward I have NEVER let anyone read something I wrote in English GOD:

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